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Chapter 1 - A new home.

_________,__________, Wake up...

You heard the sound of your mother calling you, as you slowly slipped back into consciousness, the sound got louder, You opened your eyes and light invaded them instantly, you cringed, you blinked a few times as your eyes adjusted to the scene.

Through the windscreen in front of you, you could see a white blanket of snow covering the pathways, you smiled in delight, all the tiredness out of your body had disappeared.

"Don't worry I'm up!" You called to your mother who was unloading the moving Truck with your Father.

You Had Just traveled from (Town name), all the way to Burgess, You had to drive all the way to the airport, which took about 20 minutes, get on a plane, which took 3 hours, and drive to your new home, which took an hour.

You had to get up at 5 A.M, which was why you were so tired, but now you were wide awake after finding out it had snowed.

You opened your car door and jumped out, you turned back around to see your phone laying on the right side of your seat, with earphones plugged in.

You must have fell asleep while listening to music.

You grabbed your phone and shut the car door, you then walked over to your father who had just come back from the house to collect another one of the boxes with your items from home, as much as you wanted to play in the snow, you couldn't leave your father and mother to do the job by themselves, right?

"Hey Dad you want me to help you with that?" You asked politely

Your dad smiled at you "Why thanks honey, here take this, and put it down with the other boxes in the house"

You put your phone in your pocket, and took the box he was holding, it wasn't that heavy so it was easy to carry, you made your way over to your new home and went through the front door, it seemed bigger than your old house, and looked more modern.

You placed the box down gently with the other boxes, just in case the items inside were fragile.

Your mother walked in from what seemed to be the kitchen and beamed at you "What do you think?"

You smiled weakly, "Its great!" It sounds slightly unconvincing, hopefully your mother didn't notice. As much as you loved your new home, you were also sad you had to leave your good friend (Friends name), you had her number to keep in touch, but you were still sad you had to leave her, hopefully you might make some new friends here in Burgess? so you were not a loner, you are not the best at making new friends, the only reason you were friends with (Friends name) in the first place was because she came up to you and introduced herself.

She smiled "Glad you like it, why don't you go play in the snow? me and your father will finish up here"

A smile slowly creeped up onto your face "Really? Thanks Mum!" you dashed out the door, you loved Winter with all your heart, Even if you were a teenager, you still acted like a child when you were in it.

As soon as you came into contact with the snow you stopped, you closed your eyes and let the cold temperature come into contact with your body, you loved the cold. always have, always will.

You had heard about a mischievous winter spirit named Jack Frost, Who could control the winter weather and create snow days for children around the world, you smiled at the thought then whispered.

"Thank you Jack Frost..." And continued walking through the snow enjoying every crunch the snow made with your feet.

Little did you know that the winter spirit had heard you and was watching you the whole time.
I hope you enjoyed the first chapter! I have been thinking for a while how to start the story and it just came to me in a daydream! Sorry about putting 'mum', instead of 'Mom', i'm from England so that's how i usually say it, hopefully it doesn't bother you that much.

Chapter 1 - Your here silly! :)
Chapter 2 - [link]
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
Day29 - Nosebleed 
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I love your photo of Doctor Who. You know? The oOYour-ImaginationOo picture.
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 im from NZ I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
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Phoebici Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I love your icon.
I love your username.
I love your writing.
And I love this fanfic.

Yaaas.
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IMAFTF Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist
Snif..Is Beautiful..Onion Love it!~
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xXSnowGirlXx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ok, yeah, Jack Frost's home town is Burgess, but, I don't think he lives there, I mean... he lives on the wind from what I know, so he's everywhere :))
Sadly, I moved to Romania... I used to live in Georgia though
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
Yes, but Jamie and his friends lived in Burgess.

He probably visits the place a lot, being where he lived/died before becoming a...whatever he was before a guardian...maybe a spirit? I don't know.
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xXSnowGirlXx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
oh :)
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SneakyXWoman13 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jack Frost is my stalker OMG :D
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nightfury150 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
I love how everybody's just like: OMG CUTEST STALKER EVER, I LOVE JACK FROST, HAVE MY BABIES etc, and I'm just like: the power of Christ compels you! Get out of me, demon, so I can seez himz!!!

Lol I'm weird
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Dragonempress123 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hes a stalker! stalkers are awesome! unless it happens in real life.....
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Wolfsbanepotion989 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep...
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Student Writer
Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed  Jack was watching me? SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
whas with da nose bleed?O.o
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Student Writer
You're Jack Frost. A guardian. Do I not have a reason to nosebleed?
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jack is just a HOTFirelite-photo guy with a COLD:snowflake: revamp temperature.
      Heart Heart Heart HOT-------- n'---------COLD Heart Heart Heart 
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
IRONY. when the worlds hottest guy is jack fuckin frost.
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yupp XD
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layla-mindora Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahahhahahahahahahahhahahaha
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lolz:D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) 
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student Writer
Jack Frost is hawt and I'm not the only girl to think this ;3
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that's a lie!!!!!!!

i TOO think he is hawwwt!!! X D JK JK JK
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Crazyowls2468 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Me too!
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SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
i live in Australia, New South Wales, so it doesn't snow, i want to go to Canberra for the holidays but i'll be up in QLD.
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Theghostofyoutoo Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is so good! I love it! (By the way do you have an account on quotev? I saw it there too.)
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I do ^^
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Theghostofyoutoo Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ok good. Because I saw this, and was like, "Nope nope noooooopppeeee."
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cartoonlovinggal Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh I have a cute stalker ;)
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Silverflame44 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY! Another good fanfic for me to obsess over!
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BubbltBubble Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Coincidentally I'm moving right now so it kinda fits in. Although it's not snowing. :( I do believe I'm addicted to another Fanfic! Great job! :D
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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sweetblacksugar Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
:iconclapplz: <----I'm going to place this icon at the end of every chapter i read... JS!
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconclapplz: I love that icon x3
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sweetblacksugar Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
I KNOW HEHEHE :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz:
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OVERLOAD! :iconblooddeathplz:
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sweetblacksugar Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
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AlchemistWitch14 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
I loved it
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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AlchemistWitch14 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
lol
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Snowflake316 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
My how wonderful
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mak96k Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:music: Oh, I think I just found another fanfiction to love! :music:
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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herona101 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Oh dear, just after reading the first chapter, I can tell that I'll be hooked onto your fanfic :P This is definitely a story to look forward to! Thanks for sharing! :D
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem! ^^ relief has washed over me that you liked it, phew! :3
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katnisseverdeen4life Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOD, :squee: this might be the most perfectly similar Jack Frost fanfiction to my life! I love it!!:boogie:
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwh thanks! That means a lot! :3
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skittles-and-hetalia Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Jack is always a stalker in the stories. XD Anyways, nice start-off!~
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oOYour-ImaginationOo Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
rofl xD thanks
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Np :3
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